Month: June 2015

Writealong Week 6

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Thanks to those who are still going.  By now you should have a pretty decent premise and main character.

This week your character meets a stranger.


Review: Doctor Sleep by Stephen King. A book that cannot escape the ghosts of The Overlook.

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Doctor Sleep by Stephen King     Rating 2/5 stars.

A lot of people are real snobs about Stephen King.  I’ve never understood why.  A good yarn is a good yarn no matter who it is by or what shelf it appears on in the book shop.  This time, however, I can’t help but feel a little disappointed.

I remember reading The Shining for the first time and having to have long breaks in the sunshine, so affecting is the tension and nightmarish atmosphere of The Overlook Hotel.  The infamous horror finale (yeah the famous part with the axe from Kubrick’s film) only takes up the final third of the novel.  Until then the focus is on building up the tension and introducing the reader to characters that are simultaneously sympathetic and sinister: the emotionally sensitive child Dan Torrance (REDRUM!) and his creepy imaginary friend Tony; his father Jack trying to restrain his angry outbursts and thirst for alcohol.  Stephen King has himself spoken on how Jack Torrance was reflection of himself and his own battle with alcoholism.

And here is the problem I have with Doctor Sleep: is it impossible to judge the sequel without always thinking of, always comparing with, the original story.  King himself writes in the ‘Author’s Note’ at the end of the book:

I like to think I’m pretty good at what I do, but nothing can live up to the memory of a good scare…And people change.  The man who wrote Doctor Sleep is very different from the well-meaning alcoholic who wrote The Shining…

Almost as though he knows no matter what he writes it cannot possible live up to the original.


So the book catches up with Dan Torrance as an adult some years after the end of The Shining.  He (like his father) is a recovering alcoholic who helps the dying elderly pass over to the other side. He is also getting ‘the shine’ from a young girl called Abra, who needs a mentor to help her understand her place in the world.  Much like Dick Hallorann did for Dan.

Problem is that Doctor Sleep has none of the subtle tension of the first book.  Only 4 pages in, the lady from room 217 makes a cameo appearance, having somehow travelled from the burnt Overlook (where presumably all spirits were meant to have been destroyed) to pop by and say hello.  After seeing a decaying corpse sitting on your loo, where can you possibly go after that?

Well, apparently its gonna go like that 1980’s film Near Dark. The main plot of Doctor Sleep involves a group of hippies in an RV called The True Knot, who gain strength and youth from murdering people who have the shine. Basically psychic vampires.

Of course, these vampires are super strong.  Super smart.  Super psychic.  But guess what is their one weakness?


I kid you not.

There are other things I could write about here, where a large amount of suspension of disbelief is needed but this would mean this review would be riddled with spoilers.  The ones I’ve mentioned do not really give too much away about the plot should you wish to read it for yourself.

So is there anything good?  Well, I still read to the end which means it is somehow still compelling despite it’s lack of subtlety. It also tries to give insight into the psychology of an alcoholic and what really goes on in AA meetings.

I keep wondering if I were able to judge it as a standalone book rather than a sequel, if I would be more impressed but I think that depends on what you are looking for.  If you want to be scared out of your wits, then this book isn’t going to do it. Likewise, if you want a cracking good yarn, then King has written better.

And if you really want a scary Stephen King story, reread The Shining instead! 😉

How to keep motivated (or the Ryan Gosling Editing Technique)

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I’m working my way through the third edit of my novel.  I’m just over 50% through and I’m SO BORED OF EDITING!  I know  that I need to keep on going AND JUST FINISH THE DAMN THING but it is very difficult to find the motivation.  This is how I’m trying to keep going:

1) Reminding myself that I have spent almost 3 years working on this novel.  Only 4 months of that time involved actually writing the initial story.  If I give up now that is 3 years wasted.

2) Remembering why I want to finish in the first place.  If I stop now, I’m just someone who likes writing rather than someone with a completed novel.

3) Giving myself a deadline.  I want to be finished with it by the end of the Summer so I can move on and write something else for a while.

4) Rereading ‘On Writing’ by Stephen King, my favourite no nonsense book about writing:  ‘Stopping a piece of work just because its hard emotionally or imaginatively is a bad idea.  Sometimes you have to go on when you don’t feel like it, and sometimes you’re doing good work when it feels like all you’re managing is to shovel shit from a sitting position.’

5) When all else fails, think of Ryan Gosling!

If anyone has any other suggestions that have worked for them, hey, pass them on.